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Thursday 21 February 2013

My Description

Tears flowing down his  face, as each tear fell with every miserable second passing by.  Icey cold rain froze him as his face was forced into the tree, muddy puddles wrapped around his legs. Wind shouting at him there is no way out, all the gates smash closed as he tried to escape the quicksand of mud, shadows lurking in the distance as a disgusting sound that echoed into his ears, it was like a cat scratching the life out of a black board. Insects crept up his body entering his mouth as he spits with hatred.

Sounds smashed into his ear drums saying disturbing  things, he ran but as he looked there was no end to the trail, screams of horror burnt his ears alive as they came from every corner. Thunder and lightning stormed through the land destroying everything, trees fighting and clashing trying to survive as the boy crawling beneath all the madness, a rusling had occurred from beneath him so he crawled away.

Just in time a huge anaconda of vines exploded out of its lair and it could smell fear all over him.  The school bully. So he turned, stood up and swiftly ran away. As he turned back his head the bully had disappeared, so he stopped and his sweat of fear flooded onto the ground, blood dripped from the cuts of battle.  Finally it was peaceful, the dark clouds vanished along with all of its destructive pests and finally the nightmare called school was over.            

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

That's a nice description story there Sake, Keep up the awesome smart thinking.

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Anonymous said...

I really enjoyed reading your description son. Love the way you chose and used appropriate adjectives in your writing. Keep up the awesome work.

Mom

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